Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: sonicspin on April 16, 2016, 01:32:55 am

Title: tricolor cyclops[C+C]
Post by: sonicspin on April 16, 2016, 01:32:55 am

(http://i.imgur.com/wA2IA2q.png)
it has three colors, it's a tricolor cyclops
ran into a barrier so asking for feedback
EDIT: after a PPDEdit i improve
(https://i.sli.mg/EEipBe.png)
2dit
(https://i.sli.mg/4X6Jw5.png)

Title: Re: tricolor cyclops[C+C]
Post by: sonicspin on May 06, 2016, 04:35:29 pm

Bunp  :(

Title: Re: tricolor cyclops[C+C]
Post by: Pusty on May 06, 2016, 05:09:02 pm

I like it and I don't really have much critic but I'm just going to say the little things I noticed:
I don't thing the 2 pixels between the legs ,going to left make much sense.
The top pixels of the head part looks a bit abrupt for me (might just be me lol)
Also the zipper and the lines on the legs looks a bit weird to me.no clue how to make it better tho'.

Well this wasn't really anything worth posting but I hope it helps anyways :D

Title: Re: tricolor cyclops[C+C]
Post by: sonicspin on May 12, 2016, 07:57:20 pm

Quote from: Pusty on May 06, 2016, 05:09:02 pm

I don't thing the 2 pixels between the legs ,going to left make much sense.

those are a compromise, if i remove them it looks way worse

Quote from: Pusty on May 06, 2016, 05:09:02 pm

The top pixels of the head part looks a bit abrupt for me (might just be me lol)

hum, agreed

Quote from: Pusty on May 06, 2016, 05:09:02 pm

Also the zipper and the lines on the legs looks a bit weird to me.no clue how to make it better tho'.

hum, a small nitpick,
although fixed
(http://i.imgur.com/0hchsIi.png)