Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Dokozai on October 27, 2008, 03:26:46 pm
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(http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/3518/steamboyjinoo5.png)
Introducing Jin!
Inspired by:
http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=5604.0
and
http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=7169.0
Working with an NES Pallet.
Any critique is welcome, and appreciated!
;D
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I like the characters design, its cute :P
But the spike hair is a random mess, Id suggest sorting it out a bit more. Also, the character is one pixel too short, and five pixels too wide to fit the nes restrictions. Just make the scarf shorter, and increase his legs by a pixel. His suit is lined funny, it looks like you tried to give him shorts while hes wearing a snow suit.
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(http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/8791/steamboyjinra0.png)
Not really working with the NES restrictions, just the pallet.
But I do like the scarf shorter, and his hair is more orderly.
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I really like it a lot. ^_^
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(http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/5308/steamboyjinstandwipwr3.gif)
Standing animation, a WIP, gotta make the body move.
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(http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/3723/steamboyjinstandwipcl0.gif)
Now we need hair movement, sorry for the double post...
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(http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/1970/steamboyjinrunwipmh2.gif)
Run animation WIP, like I said before, critique is welcome.
:crazy:
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Try moving the arms when he jumps. Good work so far.
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You forgot the scarf
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I think adding some knee bending, or knees for that matter, would help.