Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Andy Tran on August 26, 2007, 05:56:12 pm

Title: Logo Practice
Post by: Andy Tran on August 26, 2007, 05:56:12 pm

 This is something I did yesterday to keep me busy while eating dinner on the computer. I decided to make a pixel version of a logo from a community I joined.

 (http://www.bboy.org/images/top-logo.png)

 (http://www.filespace.org/andyspixels/bboyorglogo2.gif)

Title: Re: Logo Practice
Post by: Zoggles on August 27, 2007, 02:47:39 pm

At first glance I wasn't sure if that was BBoyOrc or BBoyOrg - the latter making more sense of course. However, I feel something needs to be done to the G (or possibly C) to make it a little more obvious. As for the character his left (our right) arm seems a little too long. His elbow looks as if it would be at his waist if his arm hung straight down. Perhaps a little more contrast on his clothing too - but that might just be my laptop screen.

-Z-

Title: Re: Logo Practice
Post by: sharprm on August 30, 2007, 01:56:11 pm

I'd make the legs longer and make the head have a few more pixels at the back. The second B needs the top left part to be in line with the bottom left part. Also, follow their lineup
more for the  first 'o', else it looks more like an 'a'.