Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Pantamime on January 05, 2011, 06:11:56 pm

Title: [WIP] Female Gunslinging Character. (First try at female)
Post by: Pantamime on January 05, 2011, 06:11:56 pm

This is another character for a game I am working toward. (Original idea was for a comic) Any Critique would be greatly appreciated. I know it is off somehow but i have been looking at it so long that i can't tell quite what is putting me off about it.  :mean:

I am sure you guys can point it out for me. Thanks in advanced!!! ;D

(http://i55.tinypic.com/dbqixi.jpg)

Title: Re: [WIP] Female Gunslinging Character. (First try at female)
Post by: Knight-Pixel on January 06, 2011, 03:55:40 pm

From what I can tell the torso seems to be a little distorted, her stomach seems to be pointing one way and her upper chest slightly to the left, and it's making the pose look a little odd. The arms too are a little strange pose-wise, what is her right hand doing? Perhaps the left arm fully extended would look more dynamic as she shoots upwards.

I hope that wasn't too harsh, I like where you're going with it :)