Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Arghus on February 05, 2007, 07:33:37 pm

Title: Vyck, Head Of Transport.
Post by: Arghus on February 05, 2007, 07:33:37 pm

This 'ere lad is Vyck. The Head Of Transport in the land called: 'A Plazz No Where Ta Be Found.'

I'm having a little trouble with his robe, it doesn't look well, in my opinion.
(http://img400.imageshack.us/img400/6979/schermgoblinih1.png)
...And here's a sloppy.. bad animated version of him riding the cart. Critism is much appreciated!
(http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5057/goblinklaarsg9.gif)

Title: Re: Vyck, Head Of Transport.
Post by: Souly on February 05, 2007, 07:52:16 pm

Why is he holding is arm out?

Title: Re: Vyck, Head Of Transport.
Post by: Arghus on February 05, 2007, 07:55:18 pm

Well.. At the start he probably shouted: "And loose!" or something in that direction to the cart operator and swung his arm forward.. And after that he just kept i-.. Bah.. Good question.. Heh.

Title: Re: Vyck, Head Of Transport.
Post by: vellan on February 05, 2007, 09:17:39 pm

really needs a direct light source. hilights and shadows will add definition to his body (and the cart) and make it easier to see immediately what it is we are looking at.

presently it took me a couple secs to get it.