Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: SinX on August 24, 2007, 03:21:31 am
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Well, I am in the final match of TUGS in my division. The theme is to do a mockup of god or something about god. SO I am doing an RPG battle mockup. Kinda like Final Fantasy. So I am focusing on getting the god done first. HE is riding the cloud and throwing thunderbolts.
I need a lot of crit. :3
:D
(http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/9586/godoncloudsy1.png)
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Your cloud looks to be way to much like many seperate balls. I suggest you make it look more like a solitary cloud, and also add more contrast.
(http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3784/cloudgh0.png) <<<Edit
I might've over dithered, but you get the idea, looks less like a stack of baseballs.
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YEah I understand what your saying. Thanks. :D
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Decided to make a more dynamic pose. Still heavy WIP
(http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/6113/zeus1dn8.png)