Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: $ymbol on October 12, 2008, 03:29:29 am
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You go in one
(http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/1773/warppipedx2.png)
(http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/3376/pipedrakerrw1.png)
ɹǝɥʇouɐ ʇno ǝɯoɔ puɐ
(http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/5055/marioowg0.png)
Persoanally I think the blue one looks just like a bunch of hues together, but idk.
Edits appreciated.
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The two points of gras coming up and mirroring eachother look off a bit, and the hit block is a little too dark I think, the "eyes" aren't quite visible enough.
(http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a360/EvilLaughKid2/New%20Stuff/marioowg0elkedit.png)
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The two points of gras coming up and mirroring eachother look off a bit, and the hit block is a little too dark I think, the "eyes" aren't quite visible enough.
That's actually a case of tiling not mirroring. ;) I actually think the tiling is quite good in general. Just on the incline is it TOO obvious I think. I agree about the eyes on the block.
I think the problem with your underground pipe is that the shadows are too dark. Since the environment is supposed to be dark, I would think realistically that every part of the pipe should be at least marginally brighter than the background so one's eyes could distinguish it from the nothingness.
Another minor note, I think the area in shadow on the above-ground pipe is too much.
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I'll have to say that the blocks other than the brick look really under-detailed. They also seem a tad small compared to the pipe.
Personally, I think the grass and the rocks look nice, but I think the bush could be a bit bigger and have better texture. The grass sticking out from the side is a bit distressing as well. And I assume you are going to detail the sky? Looks pretty good so far.
Good luck!