Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: birkka on July 22, 2013, 04:20:03 pm

Title: run cycle 16 frame help
Post by: birkka on July 22, 2013, 04:20:03 pm

hello again

I make a 16 frame run cycle and I need your  critiques and comments

(http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w75/birkka/walk09-1.gif)



thanks for helping me

Title: Re: run cycle 16 frame help
Post by: Mathias on July 22, 2013, 04:32:46 pm

His neck slightly extends and retracts.

Light source apparent on legs seems to shift around.

Title: Re: run cycle 16 frame help
Post by: rikfuzz on July 23, 2013, 08:14:15 am

The timing's kind of strange - I feel like the beginning and end of each arc should be slower (less movement), and the middle should be faster (more movement).

Title: Re: run cycle 16 frame help
Post by: birkka on July 24, 2013, 06:20:01 am

fix some little problems

(http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w75/birkka/walk12.gif)