Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: leroy on October 17, 2011, 06:34:14 pm

Title: Something that is something
Post by: leroy on October 17, 2011, 06:34:14 pm

For the sake of doing.

(http://i.imgur.com/GIjUG.png)

to

(http://i.imgur.com/80eCP.png)

Title: Re: Something that is something
Post by: PypeBros on October 18, 2011, 07:50:55 am

If the light is only coming through that window, it's un-natural to see the wall in which the window is lighter than the other (triangular) wall. That promotes the illusion that we're seeing a prisma from outside rather than an attic from inside.

Having the same horizontal lines going through both surface doesn't assist the perspective either. Try to use different sizes or at least offset them. I'm afraid you use too much contrast between the different "plates" in your second picture. Ideally, volume would have higher importance than texture details.

I like the lightning effect, though.

Title: Re: Something that is something
Post by: Jim16 on October 18, 2011, 10:08:47 am

^He said what I wanted to. But slightly better. I was a bit confused when I first looked at this, but it makes sense now.
(http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/6069/editxd.png)

Title: Re: Something that is something
Post by: leroy on October 18, 2011, 12:06:55 pm

Yeah I was thinking about that when I took a quick look at it in the morning. I'll work on it a bit later, thanks for the replies.