Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: s3rcan on July 04, 2013, 12:29:32 pm

Title: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: s3rcan on July 04, 2013, 12:29:32 pm
Hello i am a beginer in pixel art and i want to have your opinions on this image i made thanks :)
(https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/0mfo84dlurvhg5l/chaasdr.png?token_hash=AAFedtjx10kqLKWyNYDbUd_5JmUvs-khi2crikuTEJW4VA&dl=1)
Title: Re: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: PypeBros on July 04, 2013, 02:26:13 pm
we have a built-in feature to zoom pictures on click on this forum. Could you please update your picture to be closer to 1:1 pixel resolution ? that would definitely help any edit.
Title: Re: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: s3rcan on July 04, 2013, 02:50:03 pm
we have a built-in feature to zoom pictures on click on this forum. Could you please update your picture to be closer to 1:1 pixel resolution ? that would definitely help any edit.
Sure! Is it better now?
Title: Re: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: Seiseki on July 04, 2013, 03:21:41 pm
It's the same size..
Don't enlarge it in any way..
Title: Re: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: s3rcan on July 04, 2013, 03:27:40 pm
It's the same size..
Don't enlarge it in any way..
It is 2:1 now.
Title: Re: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: Seiseki on July 04, 2013, 04:10:42 pm
Why not 1:1?  ???
Title: Re: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: s3rcan on July 04, 2013, 04:17:23 pm
Why not 1:1?  ???
Because i will not use it on 1:1 scale. I like big pixels more.
Title: Re: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: s3rcan on July 08, 2013, 11:20:11 am
I am working on a new one now :)
(https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/mqhyds2acn9tls9/Imassge1.png?token_hash=AAFwxBsPeufCKtihC_H3R-ESSR9h2JLrcW1P65NGaNTZ_Q&dl=1)
Title: Re: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: jams0988 on July 08, 2013, 04:28:26 pm
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Because i will not use it on 1:1 scale. I like big pixels more.
Pictures on this forum zoom in when you click on them. If you don't post your pictures in their original 1:1 size, nobody can edit your sprites to help you, and you won't get many replies besides "stop posting huge pictures!"  :lol:
Title: Re: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: s3rcan on July 08, 2013, 04:41:52 pm
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Because i will not use it on 1:1 scale. I like big pixels more.
Pictures on this forum zoom in when you click on them. If you don't post your pictures in their original 1:1 size, nobody can edit your sprites to help you, and you won't get many replies besides "stop posting huge pictures!"  :lol:
As i told i am new :) thanks for the explanation :)
Title: Re: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: Letmethink on July 08, 2013, 05:07:32 pm
One crit, don't use harsh black outlines for everything it makes everything look wrong.

Oh and also, that arm when it has one pixle shifted to the right and then one instantely to the left it won't be very visible and will look just 'wrong'.
Title: Re: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: s3rcan on July 08, 2013, 06:12:45 pm
One crit, don't use harsh black outlines for everything it makes everything look wrong.

Oh and also, that arm when it has one pixle shifted to the right and then one instantely to the left it won't be very visible and will look just 'wrong'.
Thanks for the feed back! What color should i use to outline the skin?
(https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/igpb7pk4rrac7bq/Imassge2.png?token_hash=AAFg0qmsQzIwQ_SWskg1FosbwyFp6bEJD1ZAiV8ySNmONQ&dl=1)
Title: Re: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: Letmethink on July 08, 2013, 06:19:27 pm
I personally would just use a dark colour but I would also break up the outlines a bit.

Also, it doesn't have very good forms developed as the shading is rather weak.
Title: Re: [WIP] Chell from Portal
Post by: s3rcan on July 08, 2013, 06:47:14 pm
I personally would just use a dark colour but I would also break up the outlines a bit.

Also, it doesn't have very good forms developed as the shading is rather weak.
Yeah i need to work on the shading too, i know it doesn't look good.  I also changed the head position.
(https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/a45ubm9alwapecj/Imassge3.png?token_hash=AAE2sxmkBkuaNeimuHiMKovXyC713xjagqY3mUuioyPbIw&dl=1)