Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: swork1 on July 20, 2017, 07:17:18 pm

Title: Newbie, Hoping for advice.
Post by: swork1 on July 20, 2017, 07:17:18 pm
(http://i.imgur.com/53Mo384.png)

Basically the first ever pixel art I have made that took some time. It looks ok, but I was hoping someone would have some suggestions/improvments. Thanks.
Title: Re: Newbie, Hoping for advice.
Post by: PixelFixation on July 21, 2017, 04:26:50 am
Now i'm going to preface this by saying a i'm a newbie as well but the shading in the bottom have doesn't match the top half. I'd say you'd be better of with a more subtle shading scheme in the skirt. Also i think a white background isn't a good way to present the sprite it gives it a weaker silhouette then it actually has. The design it's self is quite cool. Reminds me of dark souls a lot.   
Title: Re: Newbie, Hoping for advice.
Post by: Sersch on July 21, 2017, 09:10:40 am
in the current composition i have difficulties to understand what is going on with his hands, to me the look like they are both too short.