Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Kfuchoin on December 14, 2007, 03:25:38 pm

Title: Williamm O' Wisp [WIP]
Post by: Kfuchoin on December 14, 2007, 03:25:38 pm

Hello Guys, this is my first post here on pixelation.
Merry x-mas to all.
ok now to the point
i'm making sort of a black mage based on a dwarwing i made last week and i need to help :)

(http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/8418/jejecm0.png)


Critics, Comments, Edits all are welcome
thanks

Title: Re: Williamm O' Wisp [WIP]
Post by: EyeCraft on December 15, 2007, 02:05:16 am

Hi kfuchoin, welcome to the forum.

Colours are ultra-saturated. Steer away from the default MS-Paint colours. Far away. Outlines are pretty good none-too-jagged. I say lose the black outlines though. Also, check out some tutorials and books on shading, then come back to this piece.

Title: Re: Williamm O' Wisp [WIP]
Post by: Hyrule_SwordsMan on December 19, 2007, 05:01:02 pm

EyeCraft is right. The colors are very Saturated. There is a lot of contrast due this saturation.
Reduce the saturatioon, make HUE variations and post the edit :)