Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Jijii on January 11, 2007, 03:01:17 pm

Title: [WIP] Alien Snail
Post by: Jijii on January 11, 2007, 03:01:17 pm

Hey everyone, I'm new here..I just wanted to show what I'm working on to see if you would have any ideas that could help me with this piece, I'm not very good at shading...and I know I'd probably have to work on the outline of the creature, just any kind of help would be great, thanks guys!

(http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/8018/aliensnaillb9.png)

Title: Re: [WIP] Alien Snail
Post by: Ryona on January 11, 2007, 03:58:03 pm

The lines look pretty sloppy, and it looks like you just drew it with the mouse rather than carefuly placing pixels down.
I'd say to clean up the lines.

Also, it's hard to see the details within the shell. Make them more visible.


The sketch is interesting though.