Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Luminous_Reaver on June 13, 2007, 12:02:26 pm
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(http://xs116.xs.to/xs116/07243/RedAshWes.png)
I gotta sprite some buff guy so I can show how much more I know about anatomy though.
Lately when I do fan stuff I feel like I'm dragging myself down. The next thing I do has to be original.
Anyways I'm really not liking their right arms, but I don't know how to work it out.
Seth's cloak thing's flap things are also bugging me, but I don't know what's wrong with them, and um
here's some things I used as references:
FireRed (http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6093/trainersiz5.jpg), Seth/Wes (http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/5558/wesfanclubbywesfanclubyx2.jpg), and Ash's Hoenn clothes (http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/7176/agsatoshiwd6.png)
I've been told Seth has some readability issues, but I'm not sure I believe it.
(Then again I drew it so I know what every thing's supposed to be)
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(http://xs216.xs.to/xs216/07243/RedAshWesB.png)
Okay, Mirror B's done.
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To me, all of them besides Ash have readabilty issues.
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Could you explain why you think so? I thought Ash was the worst. :-\
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Well.. I think the hair is too...busy? on the toehrs, especially Seth. And the colors blend together to much..although Mirror B is fine..
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I, too think that the A & B sprites are cluttered, but Red seems pretty awesome to me. Ash is cool, too, but the pants have a line going across the knees...? And afro-man...Well, he look-a like-a banana.
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the line across the knees is part of the pants's design. ;x
I've got nothing new to add, c+c-wise :<
I think they look good :o