Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: madartiststan on March 13, 2007, 10:25:16 pm
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Been working on this set of bodies recently. The first one is slim, the second muscular and working on a fat one. Am having issues with the spriting and the looks however. C+C
(http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l3/thekidstan/Pixel%20Art/firstspritecopy.gif)
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Been working on this set of bodies recently. The first one is slim, the second muscular and working on a fat one. Am having issues with the spriting and the looks however. C+C
(http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l3/thekidstan/Pixel%20Art/firstspritecopy.gif)
(http://www.voguehost.com/ims/u/thepezman/Lunix/Lunix_ex1.gif) © L.P. Project (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/3.0/)
Here is a reference if you should have any questions on character anatomy and porportions.
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(http://www.voguehost.com/ims/u/thepezman/Lunix/Lunix_ex1.gif) © L.P. Project (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/3.0/)
Here is a reference if you should have any questions on character anatomy and porportions.
to be honest, i don't think that this is the best reference to go by in this or any of the other threads youve posted it in as a source for character anatomy and proportion. Different sprites have different styles, and not everything is going to use yours as a reference, especially when its.....pretty much as good as anything else out there, with plenty of room to improve.
artisan, i would suggest first upping the internal contrast so that your pixelwork is visible, and double-check your hip-region anatomy to make sure its is proper. Also, i would give the fae another go, since it is going in where it should be rounding out.. Once that is figured, we'll have more to talk about.
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The sptires could use alot more contrast, I couldn't tell the muscular one was muscular until I soomed in, and the female lacks acurate female anatomy, even if it is a sprite, it should still look like a female (especially around the chest area, I can barley tell she has breasts), or, if it is a guy, make the chest less....boob-ish. I would laso add a darker skin tone.