Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Forester on May 30, 2015, 08:20:46 am
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Hello everyone. I'm new to the forum, as you can see.
I'm posting this picture for some feedback, and just to show my work.
(http://img.ctrlv.in/img/15/05/30/55697181dc31a.gif)
The base image is not mine, it is a image in the Creative Commons by CalciumTrice from OpenGameArt which I added an animation to.
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I would change the base cape frame, where it's laying flat as though there's no wind, to be another billowing frame. It sets an odd rhythm having it there - when it billows, it should be whooshooshooshoosh, almost, whereas with the base frame it makes it whoosh-dum whoosh-dum. Apologies if that sounds nonsensical.
Additionally, the frames where the edges of the cape flip feel a little awkward. Some of the pixels feel like they're stray, almost, especially in the hood when there are two pixels just sticking out. Here's a rough edit, which admittedly feels like a less violent breeze, so you may want to keep the fuller flip at the edge of the cape.
(http://i.imgur.com/6Q2oysg.gif)
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Thanks for teh feedback!
I see what you mean :D
Your animation look amazing, even if it's just a rough edit. I actually prefer the lighter wind..
The edit looks surprisingly smooth, when I look at the frames, I would have expected a worse loop, but it's really nice...