Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Gazette on January 03, 2006, 10:55:24 pm

Title: Torayaki
Post by: Gazette on January 03, 2006, 10:55:24 pm

(http://img498.imageshack.us/img498/7623/torayaki27yn.png)

I really wouldnt mind some help with the sleeves and some C+C on the folds and such. oh, and feel free to edit it, if you like.

Title: Re: Torayaki
Post by: Peppermint Pig on January 11, 2006, 06:35:46 am

The hair that can be seen below the one arm seems too bright. It seems like you nailed details in the other areas, so arms shouldn't be a problem. Perhaps avoid black outlines from multiple directions on the sleeves. Nice highlights on hair at the top. Crotch area seems too dark... black outline on his left/our right around the hip ends abruptly... seems odd.