Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: PaceMaker on June 24, 2016, 02:52:45 am
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Hello everyone, im new in the pixel art world and im trying to learn the most posible of this for make games, well, no more to say here i show.
(http://i.imgur.com/2gwU63x.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/MDD7W3a.png)
Created with photoshop.
Pls, i need your criticisms to improve my knowledge.
PD: Sorry for bad english.
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Watch your lighting, its not consistent (mentally picture your character standing next to a ball of light and shade thinking about that)
Mostly just keep making stuff, a lot of your issues with this guy are beginner issues that'll go away with mileage. It looks cute for being new.
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This is nice! It's simple, but conveys important details.
:y:
But one thing that bugs me is that lighting. Specifically, on his shirt.
Just fix that up and this is all good :)
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Very good first try!
I would definitely suggest working on your colours and improving your form in making structure.
(http://i.imgur.com/MDD7W3a.png)(http://i.imgur.com/26SMQfE.png)
original is left
The biggest things I changed were the colours and I added some shape to the hair and shirt. Also, do note that you shouldn't pre-zoom images before you post them, as we can zoom in on them ourselves by clicking on them.
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Woa! I didn't expect so much advices from all of you, thank you so much!
Rest assured that I will take all.