Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Blues on February 28, 2017, 11:11:31 pm

Title: Hatchet
Post by: Blues on February 28, 2017, 11:11:31 pm

I feel like I've gotten worse after I took a little break so I decided to go back to making basic items but I still can't get those down it seems. I'm sorta stuck with this so I'd really like some advice. (http://imgur.com/s5LI5qc)

Title: Re: Hatchet
Post by: heyguy on February 28, 2017, 11:51:25 pm

Hey! Did you post something? I can't see it. Upload it to imgur and post the forum code here.

Title: Re: Hatchet
Post by: Blues on February 28, 2017, 11:55:38 pm

aah sorry didn't preview it;; the image is on imgur and i did use the forum code which is the weird thing im not sure why it's not showing up http://imgur.com/s5LI5qc

Title: Re: Hatchet
Post by: heyguy on March 01, 2017, 12:13:42 am

(https://i.imgur.com/s5LI5qc.png)

It's a good start! Where is the rest of the handle? Tell me about the hatchet  :lol: Did Abhram Lincoln use it to chop down a cherry tree? Does it belong to a serial killer? Does a pilgrim use it to chop wood? How old is it? Is it dull or sharp? It looks brand new to me from your image. It could use some more personality (rust, creased wood grain handle/painted handle, chipped metal blade, etc). Just my two cents!