Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: IvanX on August 02, 2010, 09:49:21 am
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Well two really, just the girl done again in a another style.
(http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/5094/mhhhh.png)
There's something wrong with the face of the middle girl, but I cant seem to understand whats wrong with it.
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I would personally try to saturate the colors a little more on the girls.
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I think what's wrong with her face, in particular, is her mouth. Rather than the lightest of 2 colors being in the middle, the darkest should be in the middle, and the lightest should be at its edges, and basically the same for the smallest girl.
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It's mostly well, but I think the proportions on Link are a tad off. I think he needs a bigger heads, shorter/skinner legs, and a smaller shield. For the middle girl....I think her pants should have 2 lines of pixels removed on the left, and maybe her face is just turned too far to her right.
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(http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/5094/mhhhh.png)
Tried to take everything said into consideration.
Better?
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I like them. :)
It's a nice style you have there.
Don't see anything that sticks out as wrong anymore.
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These are very nice! Also, the sprite on the far right reminds me of the art style in Eden of The East (http://t0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:P7Kcp9iLmZbjCM:http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/7403/morimi3689116ft2.jpg)