Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: buddy90 on October 17, 2010, 07:21:38 am

Title: Self-portrait
Post by: buddy90 on October 17, 2010, 07:21:38 am
It's just the theme this week, I guess. Anyway.

(http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/7296/portrait5x.png)
And here is the ref.
(http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/8484/013412.jpg)

This is my first real attempt at a portrait, and I think I'm doing it wrong. Also, I disturbingly look like some sort of gangster or something...anyway, help please?
Title: Re: Self-portrait
Post by: aramaki on October 17, 2010, 02:10:19 pm
My try
(http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7369/pixportrait.png)
Title: Re: Self-portrait
Post by: Wootai on October 17, 2010, 11:30:21 pm
My try:
(http://gallery.me.com/christopheragro/100018/013412-3/web.png?ver=12873584130001)

I think in yours there isn't enough space between the eyes. the head is too small/neck too long. its a good start though.