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Color Me Pink

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David:

Pju Pju:
What is it supposed to be? Are we supposed to color it? Is it a wip? Is it finished? What do you want us to do? I'll add crits to this space when I find out.

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Adding crits ^^

Maybe shape the lines to create black shadow figures. I think I see a rat on a table eating cheese in there. Or maybe a fish.

Alex:
im not even going to bother with that comment pju pju.

you know how i feel about this david, we shall stand united.

ptoing:
I have to say pjupju has a point. I mean i see it's some guy with something growing from him and so forth. Still it would be nice if you said something about it, is it finished, do you plan to take it further. Also, PINK? where? i don't get it, there is no pink in the picture.

what you have atm is an abstract sketchy thing with a nice 5 colour palette, but it can hardly be called pixelart, there is not aa or other techniques that make it look like any more than just a sketch. At least elaborate a bit why you were making it.

As crits i would say, add aa, perhaps try some dither on it, could work fine. Also i think you are not pushing yourself, this looks like something done in 15 minutes without much thinking (no offense)

Alex:
just because it doesnt have aa and dither etc. doesnt mean its not pixel art. I make alot of my junk without aa i guess and im content with it all. i think this piece is perfectly kickass. i personally love it, and i love painting with rough pixels myself. me frank and scott have all been doing it too, its alot different and has a different feel to it of course. its an acquired taste i guess lol.

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