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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Shrike on August 20, 2008, 08:00:38 pm

Title: [WIP]Mutiny!
Post by: Shrike on August 20, 2008, 08:00:38 pm
Hey.

i was recently hooked on a Nitrome (www.nitrome.com (http://www.nitrome.com)) game, Mutiny. (If you've never played it, its kind of like Worms.)
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/nitromemutinyscreen1.png)
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/nitromemutinyscreen2.png)
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/nitromemutinyscreen3.png)
After being inspired by the simple, stylistic and appealing pixel art, i thought i'd try to make a base using the same idea and style and then make some other stuff out of it.

First try:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/bliptemplate1.gif)

then i realized how much i was over-complicating it, color-wise and completely revamped:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/bliptemplate2.gif)
Jump or a walk:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/bliptemplate2rjump.gif)
Rotate:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/bliptemplate2rotate.gif)

Then i made a pirate:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/piratet2.gif) (Hence my avatar)
New pirate:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/pirate2t2.gif)

And the a cyclops:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/cyclopst2.gif)
New cyclops:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/cyclops2t2.gif)
Next new:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/cyclops3t2.gif)

Wolf:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/wolft2.gif)
New:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/wolf2t2.gif)

I think this could use some tweaking but im not sure where... Help?
Title: Re: [WIP]Mutiny!
Post by: Oltar on August 21, 2008, 01:40:03 pm
Maybe change the skin color of the cyclops for another like blue? I think that the skin of the pirate and the skin of the cyclops are too similar.
The animations are great.
Title: Re: [WIP]Mutiny!
Post by: Shrike on August 21, 2008, 03:05:19 pm
good idea. Maybe something like this?:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/cyclops3t2.gif)

i like it better, but the hair looks off to me. Anyone else think so? suggestions?
Title: Re: [WIP]Mutiny!
Post by: Oltar on August 21, 2008, 03:18:50 pm
Yup, very cool cyclops.  :y:
I like the hair, maybe with more hair? less hair? I donīt know  :huh:
Title: Re: [WIP]Mutiny!
Post by: Shrike on August 21, 2008, 03:50:08 pm
Thanks. Here's a Wolf:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/wolft2.gif)
Not sure about the blue-gray. Does it work?
Title: Re: [WIP]Mutiny!
Post by: Oltar on August 21, 2008, 11:23:58 pm
Mmm... Itīs looks like a vampire. Make some hair and a nose, I know that all the Mutiny characters donīt have a nose, but a wolf without a nose is not a wolf.
Title: Re: [WIP]Mutiny!
Post by: Zombiechao on August 21, 2008, 11:28:20 pm
The wolf just looks like a wolf head. The body seems like the bottom part of the jaw. Make the difference more clear.
Title: Re: [WIP]Mutiny!
Post by: AdamAtomic on August 22, 2008, 02:12:45 am
Hmm, I don't get that sense at all.  However the round head + fangs makes it look more like a bat or vampire or something rather than a wolf.  I think you might need a nose!
Title: Re: [WIP]Mutiny!
Post by: Shrike on August 22, 2008, 03:49:16 pm
Gotcha. Nose in progress. While im making that, here are some things i was working on before:
Either a walk-hop thing or a jump:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/bliptemplate2rjump2.gif) I think a walk-hop would work better for this, because of ease of programming. Damn it, the speep got all screwed up. it was a lot faster in Graphics Gale.
and a rotate:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/bliptemplate2rotate.gif)

EDIT
Here's the wolf:
(http://www.majhost.com/gallery/exendia/Misc/wolf2t2.gif)

i like it a lot better.
Title: Re: [WIP]Mutiny!
Post by: AdamAtomic on August 22, 2008, 06:08:22 pm
ok now the body TOTALLY looks like his chin