Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: kullenberg on May 23, 2015, 03:48:47 am

Title: [C+C] more NES cutscenes
Post by: kullenberg on May 23, 2015, 03:48:47 am

I'm gonna make a bunch of these so might aswell put them all in one thread. Sorry for spamming.

Here is a noir Don Draper kind of guy.

(http://s8.postimg.org/nhpk7jpo5/noircutscene2.png)

(http://s14.postimg.org/p9mnws77x/noircutscenelines.png)

Title: Re: [C+C] more NES cutscenes
Post by: GatKaptain on May 23, 2015, 08:15:31 pm

That's a pretty awesome idea for a cut scene but your guy looks pretty stiff and motionless.
Try turning his head a little or changing the angle of his shoulders, or give him slight grin or a look of suspicion.
Otherwise it has some pretty good shadows man!

Title: Re: [C+C] more NES cutscenes
Post by: kullenberg on May 24, 2015, 12:59:15 am

(http://s30.postimg.org/mg7tenszl/noircutscene3.png)

Here is an update. Tried out a more striking color scheme to go with the noir look.

Title: Re: [C+C] more NES cutscenes
Post by: Decroded on May 24, 2015, 03:55:02 am

I don't get into nes style that much but these r good to watch.
you'll get better critique if u keep your threads separate like you're doing now instead of dumping it all together.

keep it up  :y:

Title: Re: [C+C] more NES cutscenes
Post by: PypeBros on May 25, 2015, 12:38:58 pm

those two thin line on his face are not imho the best way to define the jaw and cheeks. I'd try something with wider areas of shadow-skin tone instead.

Title: Re: [C+C] more NES cutscenes
Post by: Decroded on May 25, 2015, 01:48:00 pm

Quote from: PypeBros on May 25, 2015, 12:38:58 pm

those two thin line on his face are not imho the best way to define the jaw and cheeks. I'd try something with wider areas of shadow-skin tone instead.

that's true it looks kinda ugly to me too but it appears intended and appropriate in that it resembles comic/pop-art penwork.