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allaze-eroler:
hello folks, i recently did a spaceship in 3D since i can't draw this ^^; so, there how it's :

http://oekakiallaze.free.fr/projet/mail_tale/spaceship_idea.png

sorry to put it as link because the image is way big like 1000x1000 so, i hope you don't mind about it ^^;

anyway, i did it in 694 tris, that was enough low for a spaceship ^^; actually, i don't have yet the texture and i plan to do it too. you're welcome to make your own texture on this 3D spaceship if you feel want to do it for fun. :3

http://oekakiallaze.free.fr/projet/mail_tale/3D/

ha yes, for about the wire, i will post it later.

enjoy !

Chris2balls:
I believe you're French...
Je trouve que le design du vaisseau est pas mal, un peu comme un mélange entre Star Wars et Albator... J'ai hâte de voir ça avec des textures!
I think the ship's design's not bad, a bit like a cross between Star Wars and Captain Harlock... I can't wait to see that with textures!

allaze-eroler:

--- Quote from: Chris2balls on March 11, 2009, 09:44:22 pm ---I believe you're French...
Je trouve que le design du vaisseau est pas mal, un peu comme un mélange entre Star Wars et Albator... J'ai hâte de voir ça avec des textures!
I think the ship's design's not bad, a bit like a cross between Star Wars and Captain Harlock... I can't wait to see that with textures!


--- End quote ---

en effet, je suis français chez la bonne vieille france ! XD
indeed, i'm french at the good old france ! XD

and thx you for this little comment :3

Zerath:
Hiya.
Nice design on the ship, but there are some things I'd like to mention. Since this really is a low spec section, you should optimize that ship a little.
After studying your model I found loads of places where you could cut lots of triangles from this. First of all, delete all triangles that are inside the ship and hidden. For example the inside ends of the angel wings, and inside polies of the "tube" that hold your jets. Also, you really don't need that much polies for the cocpit in my opinion. And I mean in both top view and front view. Your model stands currently at 694 triangles, but you could do this with 500. But if you don't feel like cutting that much just stick with deleting the absolutely no-use ones.
Cheers

allaze-eroler:
edit : i forgot to mentioning it : the model is now in 332 tris and it's much better now ^^;

zerath : you're right about it and i recently removed some unneed poly or tris so, there the new version with the wire :)

the spaceship :
http://oekakiallaze.free.fr/projet/mail_tale/spaceship_idea2.png

and the wire :
http://oekakiallaze.free.fr/projet/mail_tale/spaceship_idea2_wire.png

anyway, you're welcome to do your own texture if you want to do it so, there the .obj file :)

http://oekakiallaze.free.fr/projet/mail_tale/3D/

enjoy ! :3

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