Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: yosh64 on August 16, 2006, 12:33:34 pm

Title: ice cream muncher [updated]
Post by: yosh64 on August 16, 2006, 12:33:34 pm: hey

(http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/931/wide15xk8.png)

I just pixeled this guy today. I still haven't given him a complete polish and stuff, so I thinks you may find lots of things to improve on, but yea... any thoughts and advise would be nice :). The proportions are pretty crazy :D, his hands are just massive :). Well his right hand should be bigger than his left, I will hopefully fix that soon. I will probly end up changing the colors also, as I just used the palette from my Practise Dummy fighter.

Anyhows I hope yous like :).

cyas
Title: Re: ice cream muncher
Post by: yosh64 on August 16, 2006, 02:22:17 pm: hey

edited (changed ice cream a tad)
(http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/4840/wide15ly7.png)

I just made his right hand bigger, and up'd the contrast :).

cyas
Title: Re: ice cream muncher
Post by: yosh64 on August 16, 2006, 04:04:49 pm: hey

edit (updated both again)
(http://img306.imageshack.us/img306/1057/wide152ok2.png) and (http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/8666/wide152c2qc7.png) <- color change

Just gave him a fair bit more polish, and fixed some things :).

cyas
Title: Re: ice cream muncher [updated]
Post by: AlexHW on August 16, 2006, 05:33:58 pm: looks good, although a lot of the forms look very round except for the hands feet and head.
It makes it look like he is made up of various blobs.
I'd suggest studying the planes/surfaces of anatomy and look how they interact or transition into each other.
The hand on the left is my favorite part, mostly because of the clear hard planes and shape of it.
Title: Re: ice cream muncher [updated]
Post by: Ryumaru on August 16, 2006, 06:22:47 pm: i like it. its much more organic than your other pieces, but still has than angular shading look.
Title: Re: ice cream muncher [updated]
Post by: Terley on August 16, 2006, 07:12:04 pm: your work reminds me of playing this game on the sega, called ballz..

http://www.consoleclassix.com/gameinfo_ballz_gen.html

dunno why just the way it seems your characters are made out of certain shapes..

very nice again, but it could do with a bigger head, with better face detailing.
Title: Re: ice cream muncher [updated]
Post by: Larwick on August 16, 2006, 08:52:39 pm: Looks good. I reeeeeeaaaaaaaaaally like that hand. The main flaw on this i'd have to point out would be the icecream, as to me it just looks like sticky marbles in a cone. I'd give it more structure and have it leaning less. And i agree some of the shapes could be toned down a little. Nice work though, keep it up.