Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: GOODNIGHTdestroyer on May 14, 2006, 10:46:07 pm
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I wanted to stray away from the polygons for a moment, and create something really organic.
Yo yo, check it:
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v79/jsgo410/dsafw.png)
Remember, it's a work in progress.
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The third leg looks a bit short.
Could use a bump on the contrast, specifically on the skin. Right now it looks rather flat.
The negative space between the arm and the leg is causing more visual tension than you probably intended.
My eye wants to see a face, but the ramp is so gradual (might be the light background) that it's hard to distinguish any features (alien or otherwise).
I'm guessing that his left "leg" is an indication that this piece is still a WIP?
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The WIP looks good. Yes, about the contrast. The contrast needs to be better. The belly shouldn't be below the stomach.
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LOL! Is that a cock?!
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looks like a cock, probably is a cock. Carrying on?
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It could be called a third leg, but yes it is a cock. A big juicy cock.
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In that case, where's its banjo-string?
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I'm not making any sense out of the head, and the claw/whatever on his arm looks abit small.
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Very interesting. Pretty evil design...minus the bright pretty colors heh. The thing could use some contrast, and the 'leg-ish-like-things' could use some volume, they're fairly flat. Pretty cool creature though, hope ya get a chance to finish it.
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(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v81/Marshy/dsafw.gif)
i just really disliked the penis you had....
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This one's much longer.
An improvement.
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LOL. It's not really a penis heh. Penises don't look like that. It looks like a hip of the character.
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LOL. It's not really a penis heh. Penises don't look like that. It looks like a hip of the character.
Actually it was intended to be a penis. Sorry.
I really have difficulty with contrast, for some reason it looks right on my screen, but you all say it's wrong. Someone help me please.
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http://epaperpress.com/monitorcal/
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Heh. Then nvm for me.