Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Korvo on October 09, 2008, 06:25:54 am

Title: [WIP] Character Head
Post by: Korvo on October 09, 2008, 06:25:54 am
Okay well this is my attempt at a younger looking character (my apoligies for the size but its a template.) I'm not sure what I'm doing wrong but I always feel that by trying to make him look younger he seems too young. He is supposed to be around 19 yet he seems much younger to me.. Anyways, please post any critique on any part of it, im still rather new to pixel art and would like all the help I can get.


(http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/5972/critmg9.png)

Title: Re: [WIP] Character Head
Post by: tocky on October 09, 2008, 08:49:08 am
(http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y13/tocky/korvo-guy.png)
I made these changes:
-face longer
-forehead a bit flatter
-hairline higher
-nose longer, ears don't stick out as much
-cheekbones more defined
Title: Re: [WIP] Character Head
Post by: Korvo on October 09, 2008, 10:43:38 pm
Hmm that does make him look older, I appreciate the help. I have been messing around with it for a bit and I came up with this, I think it looks much better than the original, thank you.

c+c?

(http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/4648/crit2wk3.png)