Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Stranger on December 04, 2006, 12:13:11 pm
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Hey. Got afew game mock-ups, I could use some constructive criticism. I havn't really gotten much better and I've been doing tiles for alittle while so I thought I would post here for some wisdom.
Beach side scroller, I am aware theres no GUI, my bad.
(http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4945/beachscrollerkz0.png)
RPG Mock-up.
(http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/6687/zmockwr8.png)
As you probably noticed they also lack characters, I'll explain, I simply am -really- bad at makeing them so if anyone has any tutorials for this I would appreciate it, I'll be looking for some myself too after posting this. :)
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The side scroller background looks great. The bend in the tree bothers me a bit though. If it's from wind then I think it would happen more towards the middle of the tree. Also if its supposed to be a palm tree I think the trunk could use more texture. Right now it looks pretty smooth.
I can't offer a very good crit on the second background. The trees seem to have some perspective issues, and the whole things a bit flat feeling, but I don't have any helpfull suggestions for you there, sorry.
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The trees have issues for sure, the foliage looks like its a view from straight up while the trunk looks like a top side view. They also look like failed rips of A Link to the Past...