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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: PunkRockGrrl on March 30, 2013, 02:08:46 pm

Title: [WIP] Jenny In Space!
Post by: PunkRockGrrl on March 30, 2013, 02:08:46 pm

Hey all.
I'm starting on a platformer/shoot-em-up with a sci-fi/space theme. Here I've got the main character, a daring and independent girl named Jenny.

(http://i.imgur.com/MH9SjAG.png)

Any advice, critique, comments, criticism, and other such feedback are welcome and would be GREATLY appreciated.

edit: oh yeah, I forgot to mention that the character will pretty much always be on a black background.

Title: Re: [WIP] Jenny In Space!
Post by: PixelPiledriver on April 18, 2013, 04:14:22 am

The darkest blue on her pants is hard to read against black at 1x.

(http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-nPLd7OrZunU/UW9ybmX2pNI/AAAAAAAAF-g/pHZEXMBXpmU/s1600/spaceGirl_4.png)

(http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-tYGixMveVSc/UW9ybt_UNUI/AAAAAAAAF-c/Hy3PRCxQsAg/s1600/spaceGirlProcess.gif)

Title: Re: [WIP] Jenny In Space!
Post by: Allegro on April 18, 2013, 06:33:46 am

yeah, I'd definitely make it more contrasty if she's going to be over a black background, but it would help if you could give a frame of reference so that we know what it will look like when the game is full screened