Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: UnitZ on June 10, 2007, 09:04:48 pm
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This is my second attempt (the first was copying tutorial) to draw building. Show me my mistakes at this part of work (making form and coloring)
(http://kulakov_do.zelnet.ru/building1.gif)
sorry my poor english :)
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Well right now it's lacking a lot of detail, so it's a bit boring. And replace the dark outline between the two sections for a lighter color, they look separate as it is.
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Thanks for advice! :y:
small update
(http://kulakov_do.zelnet.ru/building1_2.gif)
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great shape, everything is clean, but i would tone down the color a bit, this yellow is burning my eyes. Also, the thing on the window beside the door, whether it's a broken or there are soem bars / spider web thing, use a shade that is not so dark, a slightly lighter tone.
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I decide to get away thing on window.
I dont have idea how to draw sign "no smoking", i draw only red circle, but cigarette.. i cant draw it. can you help me?
the white rectangle is the place for advertisement
(http://kulakov_do.zelnet.ru/building1-4.GIF)
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Looking better. But I think you should remove the orange thing and the no smoking sign. The roofs are too empty as well; there wouldn't be roof access on the building if there was nothing on the roof.
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(http://kulakov_do.zelnet.ru/building1_5.gif)
update. thanks for your advices :y:
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nice update. colourchange works very well. Still it misses something intresting. There are no textures or other eye-catching aspects about this picture. If you just made it to test isometric techniques it's okay. If you wanted make something beautiful you will have to work on it a little more (at least imo) ;)
ot: just curious: any chance you are the same person as chigsam? ::)
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nice update. colourchange works very well. Still it misses something intresting. There are no textures or other eye-catching aspects about this picture. If you just made it to test isometric techniques it's okay. If you wanted make something beautiful you will have to work on it a little more (at least imo)
thanks. at least, i'm not finish, it's only begin 8) i planned to add some more details
ot: just curious: any chance you are the same person as chigsam?
no, i'm not he :D
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very nice i made quick edit to it to show u some ideas
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/freddie_v101/factort.png)
remove the windows and where the red is make like the building owners name and comapnay stuff i dunno lol just sounds good :P
extend path and road and maybe have path from side door
have a helipad on tall building
maybe some people and vehicles
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any way good job