Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: 0nepixel on February 25, 2016, 09:11:45 pm

Title: I need help with my monkey
Post by: 0nepixel on February 25, 2016, 09:11:45 pm

 (http://i.imgur.com/Ymi0rWt.gif)

Title: Re: I need help with my monkey
Post by: Seiseki on February 25, 2016, 09:18:54 pm

(http://i.imgur.com/W2FYoHp.png?1)

Cute, but you need the address to the image itself to use it with [img] tags.
Rightclick -> copy image address (in chrome, probably similar in other browsers)

Title: Re: I need help with my monkey
Post by: 0nepixel on February 25, 2016, 09:21:01 pm

ups sorry for that  :blind:

Title: Re: I need help with my monkey
Post by: Seiseki on February 26, 2016, 07:39:53 am

Some quick thoughts..
I don't think the way you draw the mouth/nose makes sense for monkeys.
The palette is also a bit weak, certain colors don't have enough impact and there is quite a lot of color banding (areas where two colors are right next to each other and form noticeable bands.)

(http://i.imgur.com/BdOR0hk.png)

Title: Re: I need help with my monkey
Post by: 0nepixel on February 26, 2016, 04:46:29 pm

 :y: thanks!

Title: Re: I need help with my monkey
Post by: Decroded on February 26, 2016, 10:05:22 pm

just wondering if that original mouth more of a cute anime expression than trying to draw an actual monkey's mouth?
it kinda looks like what u see a character's face change to sometimes in those silly style animes.

Title: Re: I need help with my monkey
Post by: Seiseki on February 27, 2016, 09:24:18 am

I thought about that as well, but I wasn't convinced because the middle part went up so far.

(http://i.imgur.com/0sM9HQy.png)

Here's another edit because monkeys are fun :3

Title: Re: I need help with my monkey
Post by: 0nepixel on February 27, 2016, 07:33:40 pm

omg, so good, thanks a lot seiseki  ;D