Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: jinza on May 10, 2012, 12:09:23 pm

Title: Jintaro a custom character
Post by: jinza on May 10, 2012, 12:09:23 pm

(http://neuropod.net/imagehost/uploads/af96c422a0beb472b46b441fd2fe15d7.PNG)(http://neuropod.net/imagehost/uploads/1cf1b1e51cbe4121b25a27cc3eacca0e.gif)The old animation that i'm changing like i did on the first two sprites[the first one is the revamped one of course]

Title: Re: Jintaro a custom character
Post by: Hideon on May 10, 2012, 03:41:13 pm

It's nice :) but in some things the new one is worse. That new texture on the sprite looks a bit strange.
About the portrait, I recommend you thiner folds on the clothes and I think you also need to improve with the color choice.

Here my edit:
(http://s18.postimage.org/mxr84vq05/jintaro.png)
It could be better, but hope this will help to understand more how you should make the clothes.

Title: Re: Jintaro a custom character
Post by: Stava on May 10, 2012, 06:34:45 pm

Quote from: Hideon on May 10, 2012, 03:41:13 pm

It's nice :) but in some things the new one is worse. That new texture on the sprite looks a bit strange.
About the portrait, I recommend you thiner folds on the clothes and I think you also need to improve with the color choice.

Here my edit:
(http://s18.postimage.org/mxr84vq05/jintaro.png)
It could be better, but hope this will help to understand more how you should make the clothes.

Very nice edit,
I played with it for a bit, this is what I made:
(http://i.imgur.com/sWwMt.png)