Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: underb0ss on May 03, 2013, 10:44:18 pm
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Hi!
I started another pixel art of a platform game. His name is "Fred, the panda."
Did the scene already, but I need help on the character, I have it from the front, but not sideways.
(http://i1358.photobucket.com/albums/q762/lfspr/newmockup_zpsf464a50c.png)
(http://i1358.photobucket.com/albums/q762/lfspr/preview_zps3a96f6df.png)
I need tips!
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Tried to make your lil' panda a bit more detailed. Sorry if it looks amateurish, I'm new here.
(http://s13.postimg.org/v00f3mnz7/preview_zps3a96f6df.png)
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Sketch by Merez.
(http://i.imgur.com/vn9v5C3.png)
I'll continue.
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Thank you Suptapong for the tip. I'll fixed this!!
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I like the waviness of the tree trunks, but the way they sort of randomly appear on one side or the other confuses me as to where the light source if in this mockup. To add to that, some of the bright spots on the trees tend to imply conflicting light sources as well. A good starting point for the next iteration of the pixel art might be to choose a specific light source area and start working toward everything using that source.
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Had stopped working with this mockup, but I decided to go back to it...
I'm in doubt about what to do on the trunks of trees. The character already almost done. Tips?
(http://i.imgur.com/cP3cXiv.png)