Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: 4iiii on May 01, 2015, 02:23:16 pm
-
Hey folks,
I've been infatuated with pixel art for a looong time, but this is my first real attempt at pixeling. For what it is, I'm happy with it, but I know it could look a LOT better. I want to elaborate the color/texture of the hair and beard, but I have no idea where to start... Anyhow, I'm looking forward to the feedback! ;D
Previous:
(http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn8/labinnak82/sketch_pixel_beard_zpsqrvjmvld.jpg)
Current:
(http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn8/labinnak82/sketch_pixel_zpsmn43afbj.gif)
I used the edit as a guide and played around a lil bit with the color. I also added some color on my chin, because I do have a lighter patch there, and wanted it to show...but I also liked the shading of the beard, but couldn't get both to look right...so there ya have it.
-
hey!
your first attempt is awesome man, you have a nice style! I'd recommend some shading just to add a bit of depth. It makes a massive difference.
For the hair/beard, I'd keep it quite simple, like avoid detailing in individual hairs and treat it like its a solid form.
I started doing pixel art about 5 months ago and what I've come to realise is that less is more (particularly when you're starting out), which took me a while to realise :)
But yeah, you've totally hit the ground running, can't wait to see it finished! x
-
Grimbee is right, keep it simple and define your shapes.
Also, don't be afraid to go for some bolder colors (more contrast and a small change in color), something like this!
(http://pixel-icious.com/wayofthepixel/4iiii-selfportrait.png)
Would love to see some more portraits in a similar style!
Also, I don't know if its Photobucket or just you, but for pixel art JPG is a big nono :)
-
Did it show up as a jpeg?? Dammit! :o
Okay, sorry about that... I must've screwed up the upload :P
That edit, looks awesome! I have been playin around with shadowing, but haven't gotten it to look right. Thanks for the insights you guys! :y:
-
NICE ONE