Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Magides on August 08, 2010, 08:11:44 am

Title: [WIP] Second Attempt
Post by: Magides on August 08, 2010, 08:11:44 am

Keeping with the vegetable theme, here's another try, but with Asparagus.


(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78/Goatish/Pixel/asparagus1.png)


I had a hard time shading / coloring the stalk, but found this to be acceptable.

Constructive feedback is appreciated.
In case you're wondering, here is my reference photo.
http://theora.com/images/asparagus.jpg (http://theora.com/images/asparagus.jpg)

Thanks!

Title: Re: [WIP] Second Attempt
Post by: Demon11777 on August 11, 2010, 07:32:57 pm

Looks delicious!   I made a tinyy edit though.  I didn't like the light colors on the top. I darkened those a bit and I thought that having those lime green areas were a bit hard to read so I put a darker outline around it.  I hope it helps , I am nowhere near a great spriter but i hope that i was helpful. (http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/4293/veggi.png)

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Title: Re: [WIP] Second Attempt
Post by: Magides on August 13, 2010, 08:13:59 pm

Nice, I think  that's a great idea.

I appreciate the help! ;D