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Cooking animation

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znkart:
hello everybody,

i just finished my first animation in aseprite and would like to have some feedback on it, as i am new to animating pixels.  :)
i got inspired by these stop motion cooking videos and wanted do one of my own now, in which i am going to prepare some pancakes. i hope you like it!

you can see it here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pSK5A7Ma5vQ

thank you!
timmy

Curly:
Nice job! I would reduce the background's contrast so the foreground objects stand out more. There are a couple of moments when they blend a bit into the background because the color is similar.

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