Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Gatts on June 02, 2011, 10:58:06 pm

Title: C+C Ogre
Post by: Gatts on June 02, 2011, 10:58:06 pm

Looking for CC.

It is my first try to animate  ;D  Colours from Ragnarok Online

(http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/152/c/5/ogre_idle_by_pa_giof-d3ht352.gif)

Title: Re: C+C Ogre
Post by: Cure on June 02, 2011, 11:04:58 pm

I think the movement of the chest and stomach is pretty good, I'd tone down the shoulder shrug though (maybe have them pivot back a little, but less vertical action). the static head looks peculiar with such heavy breathing going on, should probably straighten his neck a bit when the chest pumps out (due to the movement of the spine).

the foot on our left looks like it's on a hill, compared to the other foot, which is flat. could use some darker darks to make it pop, and some more lively, less mauve colors would spice it up a bit too (looks kinda monochrome atm). pixel clusters could use some refining, having a more defined light source might help you make those decisions.

Title: Re: C+C Ogre
Post by: Gatts on June 03, 2011, 12:37:59 am

Thanks alot Cure   :D I wil work on every tip you wrote here

Better now?

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(http://i1125.photobucket.com/albums/l592/gfranciss/th_ogre_idle02-2.gif)  (http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/152/c/5/ogre_idle_by_pa_giof-d3ht352.gif)

Title: Re: C+C Ogre
Post by: Candy Man Criminal on June 04, 2011, 07:42:01 pm

having the head move in only the one frame looks a bit off to me
might just be me tho

also he looks kinda depressed, just sayin

Title: Re: C+C Ogre
Post by: piffany on June 18, 2011, 04:41:14 am

Quote from: Candy Man Criminal on June 04, 2011, 07:42:01 pm

also he looks kinda depressed, just sayin

I thought he looked sad too, so I made him angry instead:

(http://i52.tinypic.com/ivy8a0.gif)

Also, a note on the animation: his collar bones are not moving with the upper body.

Title: Re: C+C Ogre
Post by: Candy Man Criminal on June 18, 2011, 05:16:01 am

well the eyes have an angry shape, but theyre completely soulless
but at least he isnt gunna cry now lol

Title: Re: C+C Ogre
Post by: piffany on June 18, 2011, 03:04:34 pm

Quote from: Candy Man Criminal on June 18, 2011, 05:16:01 am

well the eyes have an angry shape, but theyre completely soulless
but at least he isnt gunna cry now lol

Yeah I think I used too much black on his eyes

Title: Re: C+C Ogre
Post by: toaster on June 18, 2011, 05:32:09 pm

Maybe I'm asking a stupid question, but why doesn't he have a navel? ???
About the animation: Is he gasping or just breathing? If he's breathing, I think his arms are moving to much.
And I don't like the black eyes. They doesn't look like eyes.
Besides of that, I really like it. Well done! ;D

Title: Re: C+C Ogre
Post by: Gatts on June 19, 2011, 02:00:47 am

Quote from: piffany on June 18, 2011, 04:41:14 am

Quote from: Candy Man Criminal on June 04, 2011, 07:42:01 pm

also he looks kinda depressed, just sayin

I thought he looked sad too, so I made him angry instead:

(http://i52.tinypic.com/ivy8a0.gif)

Also, a note on the animation: his collar bones are not moving with the upper body.

Oh, i didn't noticed the collar bones thing, thanks!  :crazy:


thanks for the comments