Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: EyeCraft on April 05, 2006, 12:55:43 pm

Title: Fighter Sprite WIP
Post by: EyeCraft on April 05, 2006, 12:55:43 pm

*jumps on band wagon*

First off, hello everyone! I'm a pixelopolis newbie, rearing my head. Spent some fond times at ye old pixelation, thought it was about time I head on over to here.

Yes, fighter sprite, been inspired by the influx of all of them of late, so I've started giving one a crack, following the SpriteArt tutorial, here's what I've got so far:

(http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/5552/brett36op.png)

It's giving me bad vibes, the stance and legs, what do you think?

Title: Re: Fighter Sprite WIP
Post by: Souly on April 05, 2006, 04:18:35 pm

I like the pose.
The body just seems a bit large for the head.

Title: Re: Fighter Sprite WIP
Post by: yosh64 on April 06, 2006, 10:41:29 am

hey

Nice design, shorts and thongs... just need a BBQ, hehe ;). I also think the size of his head is fine!

cya

Title: Re: Fighter Sprite WIP
Post by: snake on April 06, 2006, 11:17:23 am

First thing that came to mind were the legs. The top part of the leg is supposed to be ither longer or as long as the bottom. Also, hes left leg is a bit off the ground.

Title: Re: Fighter Sprite WIP
Post by: EyeCraft on April 09, 2006, 02:46:26 am

Quote from: yosh64 on April 06, 2006, 10:41:29 am

Nice design, shorts and thongs... just need a BBQ, hehe ;). I also think the size of his head is fine!

Hehe yeah its a sprite of my mate brett, he's always got the wife-beater and thongs thing going.

Quote from: snake on April 06, 2006, 11:17:23 am

First thing that came to mind were the legs. The top part of the leg is supposed to be ither longer or as long as the bottom. Also, hes left leg is a bit off the ground.

(http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4560/brett041dg.png)

I lengthened the legs and shifted his left leg, seems to look a fair bit better.  :)

UPDATE:

Changed the arms a bit-

(http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/9836/brett57bw.png)