Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: missingno on August 23, 2008, 06:21:07 pm
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Just something I've been working on a little bit this morning. I'm trying to come up with an rpg sprite style that's a bit more realistic than some of my other attempts.
It's a bit messy, because I haven't really gotten to the details yet. I want to make sure that I'm pleased with the animation and general structure first.
(http://bb.xieke.com/files/idle.gif) (http://bb.xieke.com/files/anim.gif)
As always I'd appreciate some feedback.
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the thin waist and hilit chest makes me think it's a girl, but the broad shoulders and mannish posture look...Mannish. So which is it?
also, the huge head and that thin looking body looks like they totally don't match
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Ah, my friend in irc just said the same thing when I showed her.
It's intended to be a butch girl of sorts (space soldier type). The shoulders are definitely too broad now that I look at it, but the heavy posture is intentional.
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Okay, I've made some changes.
old
(http://bb.xieke.com/files/idle.gif) (http://bb.xieke.com/files/anim.gif)
new
(http://bb.xieke.com/files/idle1.gif) (http://bb.xieke.com/files/anim1.gif)
Hopefully she's a bit more feminine now.
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okay a little bit of a bump i guess. i've done a little bit of work on perspective. i edited the idle frame to try and make it seem more top-down.
(http://bb.xieke.com/files/grethennew.png)
i also started on the side-view. not much there yet, though.