Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Nagariku on June 05, 2016, 11:05:39 am

Title: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?
Post by: Nagariku on June 05, 2016, 11:05:39 am

So I made an animation for Pixel Dailies, first attempt at pixel animation, any tips or changes?

(http://i.imgur.com/OXpq8cA.gif)

Title: Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?
Post by: MysteryMeat on June 05, 2016, 11:07:04 am

that tub's pretty full, would probably overflow at that point

Title: Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?
Post by: Nagariku on June 05, 2016, 11:30:10 am

Quote from: MysteryMeat on June 05, 2016, 11:07:04 am

that tub's pretty full, would probably overflow at that point

Tried to make it seem less full, but it seems that I failed

P.S. Made bubbles follow through

(http://i.imgur.com/04yPOV5.gif)

Title: Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?
Post by: MysteryMeat on June 05, 2016, 10:01:58 pm

Here, I did up a quick thing to fix it towards what I meant. What I did was move the water down some and toss in a darker shade to represent the inner wall of the tub.
I also sped it up apparently, but that was kind of an accidental thing as I thought I'd somehow mucked up the framerate while messing around with it.
(http://i.imgur.com/cDLqj0Z.gif)

Title: Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?
Post by: SmashAdams on June 06, 2016, 04:24:53 am

Quote from: MysteryMeat on June 05, 2016, 10:01:58 pm

Here, I did up a quick thing to fix it towards what I meant. What I did was move the water down some and toss in a darker shade to represent the inner wall of the tub.
I also sped it up apparently, but that was kind of an accidental thing as I thought I'd somehow mucked up the framerate while messing around with it.
(http://i.imgur.com/cDLqj0Z.gif)

that inner tub wall shadow is everything

Title: Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?
Post by: Xer0bot on June 06, 2016, 12:13:15 pm

Now make it ten times bigger. :p

Title: Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?
Post by: Nagariku on June 06, 2016, 12:34:22 pm

Nice, looks much better than mine, still wondering what the white stuff is on the wall

Title: Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?
Post by: MysteryMeat on June 06, 2016, 08:31:30 pm

it was in the original, i assumed it was water froth