Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: souper on July 18, 2010, 04:00:01 am

Title: [Wip]Fixin?
Post by: souper on July 18, 2010, 04:00:01 am

Hello,

could anyone fix my guy...(http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/7388/wiggycloud.gif)

I'm a beginner at spriting and what I have I thing is GOOd this is what I have, but if you disagree please fix
(http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/6277/battlefield.gif)

(http://img541.imageshack.us/img541/2461/summitstage.png)

Title: Re: [Wip]Fixin?
Post by: Jon on July 18, 2010, 12:37:12 pm

Are these Super Smash Bros levels? If so, I can spot several things. I think you should try ti start our shading smaller things, as there are many unbroken expanses of colour as well as much pillowshading on both maps, especially the second.

As for the sprite, this is not a place where people try to "fix" your work for you but instead try to help you improve. If you mean edit, people do that here, but it is still meant as a learning exercise.

Title: Re: [Wip]Fixin?
Post by: Hyrule_SwordsMan on July 18, 2010, 05:44:12 pm

Hey there, good job for a begginer, btw :] although
I don't think those black outlines really help you. The lack of contrast in those pieces makes the objects flat. Some AA could help you, specially when u use defined lines, like in the first stage's rock path.
Keep it going