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[WIP] Character image

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skeddles:
 :y: looks ok, but i think it needs more work

Macks:
The lines need to be smoothed, there are quite a few unnecessary jumps of several pixels.
On the lighter part of his cap the dark blue could be used to ease the transition between outline and lighter blue.
The same could be done for the skin.

I would also recommend making the background transparent, or AA-ing the outline.

Tremulant:
Looks pretty good so far. The outlines need smoothing as mentioned, and the AA borders on pillow shading in places (particularly in the hair).

I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and assume you're planning on throwing a face on there. If not, plan on throwing a face on there!  :P

Akzidenz:
As far as basic shapes and shading are concerned, I don't have any critiques to offer up - I'd just love to see it finished.

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