Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: pixelarg on July 18, 2008, 08:48:25 am

Title: Kawaii toast mockup
Post by: pixelarg on July 18, 2008, 08:48:25 am

hello =D this is a mockup of a game of toast, is a wip, :P but... I can not improve the BG (??, Background, fund?) besides other things, can you help me?? =D I really appreciate the edits ^^

the mockup ^^:
(http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/1218/mockuptostadacd9.png)

Thanks ^^

PD: really like the toast! xD!!!

Title: Re: Kawaii toast mockup
Post by: infinitegames on July 18, 2008, 09:57:34 pm

I suggest making the dithering on the sides less obvious. I think everything else about the character looks really good, but I"m no expert so take that with a grain of salt.

Title: Re: Kawaii toast mockup
Post by: kitty on July 19, 2008, 09:36:35 am

I like the colors!
You should make the shadow side of the toast (the crust) a darker shade because it blends together with the face.
The eyes of the toaster are over done and capture too much unwanted attention. The squints of the toast are under done and don't stick out enough.