Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Kren on March 05, 2006, 01:44:15 am

Title: a Background..
Post by: Kren on March 05, 2006, 01:44:15 am

well, I made this for a mockup and i need some help with it i don't know why, but i think something is wrong, C+C needed..

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v238/Krensprite/bc3f54ca.png)

Title: Re: a Background..
Post by: Matriax on March 05, 2006, 09:45:53 am

I think you use too many dithering. Try detailed more the mountains etc...

Title: Re: a Background..
Post by: Razz on March 05, 2006, 03:55:20 pm

Is this a large cabbage garden?

Title: Re: a Background..
Post by: Dhaos on March 05, 2006, 05:06:47 pm

This is...interesting. I'm guessing the green is a forest and the background is mountain and sky. The details are very unclear right now so you might need to develope the forest-form a bit more. Google some arial views of forests for inspiration. Also like Matriax said, the mountains could use more detail/shape.

Title: Re: a Background..
Post by: Kren on March 05, 2006, 11:07:17 pm

ok thanks, well I made another version with no forest, >_< it's still incomplete, but i wanna know what you think of the mountains

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v238/Krensprite/rvsbmockup.png) as you can see i added more detail to the small mountains, i might add more, well the big mountain is really incomplete, i will change the colour and add details.