Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Fluttershaft on March 30, 2016, 07:04:56 pm
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Here are the 2 main characters of my game:
Melan - the player character
(http://i.imgur.com/99ve1tJ.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/V3xVVbc.png)
I like his sprite so it's probably gonna stay. I'm not sure about the portrait however. He's supposed to look sort of lifeless and bleh.
Holly - she stays with you during most of the game, (her sprite is drawn where player was 1 sec. ago)
(http://i.imgur.com/XKTbRa1.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/kNU06CT.png)
I'm pretty happy with her design and colors, but again, not sure about the portrait.
For reference and context,(where and how I am going to use the sprites) here's screenshot from Tess (not my game)
(http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/games/6703/screenshots/screen2.png)
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the portrait for the girl needs a LOT of work on the arms and torso, and the shading on Melan is a bit inconsistant with the armpit done as it is.
Digging the design on them though.
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I made some changes, not sure if for better, still waiting for help.
(http://i.imgur.com/s09VpSO.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/TbSjBri.png)
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I feel like you might have to just redraw the girl entirely, there's a lot that needs fixing in the anatomical sense.
Try taking a picture of yourself doing the pose and working from that as reference,
or pick up a copy of this >terawell.net/terawell/?lang=en < and use that.
Having a proper reference can make all the difference.
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(http://i.imgur.com/RW7ViRX.gif)
edit on face