Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Tom on January 22, 2010, 12:48:12 pm
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Hi guys,
been working on this for the last few days and it still looks like crap. I know I'm getting better and learning the more I work on it but at this stage I need to take a step back and evaluate.
I feel I need some input or would love to see what others can add or change, or help me not vear in the wrong direction.
(http://www.splashofchilli.com/dsc/images/DSGShipMFreight.png)(http://www.splashofchilli.com/dsc/images/DSG_spriteShip.png)
Space freighter ship thingie
so yeh this is no where near finished its a huge WIP, but I would love as much input as I can get.
Cheers
Tom
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Well, let us see here.
You've got some decent detail in there, that's good. For the moment there isn't much to go off of, but might I suggest going into Commercial Critique under the Challenges forum and looking for the Dodonpachi Assembly Line. Save some of those that you like and check out their style, I think It'll help a ton with the excess detailing and shading of said details.
I also presume it's supposed to be top-down and not 3D, so you're set in that area.