Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Afelium on March 16, 2018, 09:53:57 pm
Title: Kobold dark mage
Post by: Afelium on March 16, 2018, 09:53:57 pm
Did this,looking for critique. Don't know how to shade his robe,especially on his right sleeve and knee. I'm not sure if it needs a third green for the skin shading and a third blue for the robe (https://i.imgur.com/1I86ZU8.png)
sorry if I've been absent lately,I've been
I'm
busy these months
Title: Re: Kobold dark mage
Post by: MysteryMeat on March 17, 2018, 03:10:16 am
WATCH OUT BOYS HE'S GONNA CURSE YO DIIIIIIIICK
Jokes aside though, you should put in some time to get your curves down. You have a lot of really jaggy chunky lines here that could stand to be cleaned up a bunch, most notably along his sleeve there.makes it look less like folds and more like strange patterns in the fabric, doesn't quite work.
Also for folds you need to tweak the "outline" a bit so that it matches the lines of the folds, as you've drawn it parts should be sticking up that arent around the tops of those lines
Title: Re: Kobold dark mage
Post by: Afelium on March 18, 2018, 06:48:11 pm
Thanks for the advice,tried to follow it.I'm trying to understand the logic behind the folds,but I cant get it right.Do you have some good advice/tutorial/references about clpthes and folds?? (https://i.imgur.com/8HGF6c8.png)