Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Dogmeat on November 03, 2006, 04:39:16 am

Title: Taco Dogmeat
Post by: Dogmeat on November 03, 2006, 04:39:16 am

More playing around with just Black and white.

(http://www.mindcrank.com/taco_dogmeat.png)

Title: Re: Taco Dogmeat
Post by: VictorR on November 03, 2006, 01:21:38 pm

What the hell did that dog eat.

Very nice piece, though the rocks look like peebles. Swirl those out a bit.
Also  his stance seems off.

Title: Re: Taco Dogmeat
Post by: Faceless on November 05, 2006, 09:20:40 am

I'm sorry, and I know this probably isn't my place to say, but kokew00t's post really annoys me...

Anyway, Dog, I think this piece lacks a certain clarity and leans towards the messy side of things.
I really don't know what that blob underneath the dog's tail is, but I'm assuming it's a rock for this crit:
When working with only 2 shades, you really need to work harder to define shapes.
That rock is a bit of a dithery mess, but if you broke up the speckle regions with solid black or white chunks (in places), you could define the shapes of the rock through a lightsource.

Edit: Well apparently it's a turd, in which case I think my crit still stands... but whatever.