Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Koi Kami Mauro on March 08, 2009, 09:02:14 pm

Title: [WIP] Character Sheet.
Post by: Koi Kami Mauro on March 08, 2009, 09:02:14 pm

So, I'm trying to make a sheet of... myself (it's a cartoon) to use in... dunno. Comics? Games? Maybe games.

Anyways, here it goes:

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v173/Tornadoman/custommauro-1.gif)

C & C please. Thanks :D

Title: Re: [WIP] Character Sheet.
Post by: thedaemon on March 08, 2009, 11:34:05 pm

You wear a one piece jumpsuit that covers your feet to? Looks odd. Not enough contrast between the beard? Scarf? Not sure what it is. Are you wearing glasses? It's not really clear to me. Also, why the ball hands? You hair or could it be a hat, goes back behind your ears pretty far. If it's a hat, it looks like hair. :) Hope this helps!  :D

Title: Re: [WIP] Character Sheet.
Post by: Koi Kami Mauro on March 13, 2009, 12:58:11 pm

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v173/Tornadoman/Untitled-26.gif)

Maintaining the three black colors, I managed to differentiate the coat from the pants and shoes. Also separated head from scarf better. Finally, the... dunno what to call it in english. It's a tube of cloth, like in this:

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v173/Tornadoman/head-1.gif)

PS:

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v173/Tornadoman/sawnik.gif)

Title: Re: [WIP] Character Sheet.
Post by: Koi Kami Mauro on March 21, 2009, 04:48:18 pm

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v173/Tornadoman/mauroagain-1.gif)
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v173/Tornadoman/Image1again.gif)
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v173/Tornadoman/Image2again.gif)
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v173/Tornadoman/Image3D.gif)

Yeah, finally found a use for this sprite sheet. MSN emoticons. XD